tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5722735165669239585.post2417915964640691827..comments2023-05-24T23:33:57.516+10:00Comments on My Unwelcome Stranger: Five Sentence Fiction: DevotionDenis Wrighthttp://www.blogger.com/profile/12786035137418348609noreply@blogger.comBlogger7125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5722735165669239585.post-52070473477405853182012-10-05T04:27:28.887+10:002012-10-05T04:27:28.887+10:00I can easily relate to this kind of devotion... ma...I can easily relate to this kind of devotion... make it chocolate and I'm in love! Cleverly written to pull us in and leave us smiling!Josie Two Shoeshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18388032819905416258noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5722735165669239585.post-36152387388435269822012-10-04T09:07:42.767+10:002012-10-04T09:07:42.767+10:00I'm not sure if the devotion in her eyes is fo...I'm not sure if the devotion in her eyes is for the young man or her food order, but there's definitely some "hunger" happening. Fun piece.injaynesworldhttp://injaynesworld.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5722735165669239585.post-15527978009323633162012-10-04T04:33:06.902+10:002012-10-04T04:33:06.902+10:00Haha! Of course I was totally headed in the wrong ...Haha! Of course I was totally headed in the wrong direction! Very nice!Andrew Swinglerhttp://www.tospeakperchance.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5722735165669239585.post-329073736816894672012-10-02T21:17:00.703+10:002012-10-02T21:17:00.703+10:00Ha ha, made me smile!Ha ha, made me smile!Lisa Shambrookhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12767127776898278402noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5722735165669239585.post-26801470522657900682012-10-02T16:21:47.774+10:002012-10-02T16:21:47.774+10:00lol, I like the twist. Oh the guilt of taking a tr...lol, I like the twist. Oh the guilt of taking a trip to Fat City. Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5722735165669239585.post-13688290402217138372012-10-02T16:21:29.173+10:002012-10-02T16:21:29.173+10:00I suffer from the same devotion myself... Nicely ...I suffer from the same devotion myself... Nicely done.Sandra Crookhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00534491053812317718noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5722735165669239585.post-75988026593263852772012-10-02T15:28:15.453+10:002012-10-02T15:28:15.453+10:00oh! Unrequited love! Dipenoh! Unrequited love! DipenPeripatetichttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03784405553905356940noreply@blogger.com